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What is your favorite kind of music? Do you like jazz.popular music or folk music? I think different people have different answer .My father and I like the different music.As a young man.I like the popular music very much.I think this kind of music represent passion and vitality .My father don’t think so .He likes the classic music.He thinks this music is elegant He said if the classic music is your favorite music,that represent.you have a good taste.
Above all ,music is called a universal lauguage.It speaks a special word can make up us feel joy and exaitation.No matter what kinds of music do you like ,you just need to appreciate it .Love music ,Love life .

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What is your favourite music?Do you like jazz.popular music or folk music?I think different people have different answers.
As a young man.I like the popular music very much.I think this kind of music represent passion and vitality .My father doesn't.He likes the classic music.He thinks this music is elegant .He said if the classic music is your favorite music,you have a good taste.Above all ,music is called a universal lauguage.It can make us feel joy and exaitation.
No matter what kinds of music do you like ,you just need to appreciate it .Love music ,Love life .