谁能帮我修改这篇英语作文?MyViewonWinningWinningisobviouslyvitalinourlives,becausehonestly,thatiswhatweworkhardforlotsoftime.Itdoesfeelgreatwhenyouwin,butnoonecankeepwinningthroughouttheirlives.Sowhatdow

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谁能帮我修改这篇英语作文?
My View on Winning
Winning is obviously vital in our lives,because honestly,that is what we work hard for lots of time.It does feel great when you win,but no one can keep winning throughout their lives.So what do we do when we lose?Complaining about how unfair life is,or secretly hating the winner?The answer is no,we should always be prepared for losing and dare stand up and keep on moving,because all that complaining does is to waste your time.However,if you learn the lesson from losing this time and keeps a positive attitude,there is a much bigger chance that you will win next time.And stop bragging around if you actually do win,because the losers will all be working hard for next time when you are showing off.
Life is just as a game,people win and people lose.But what matters the most is that you have done your best on whatever you decide to work on,because then no matter what you end up with,there will be no regrets.
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Hello,everybody!
My name’s sophie.Today,the title of my speech is badminton—my favorite sport.
I am fond of playing sports,because①【 sports is helpful for my body.】When I’m free,I often play sports with my friends at the sport centre.②【Because】we can have a good time when we play together.
③【Personally,去掉】My favorite sport is badminton.Why?There are many④ 【reason 加s】⑤{can let me love badminton.改为for that】First,I think it is easy to play badminton.It doesn’t like tennis ,difficult to control.Badminton is a popular recreational sport.⑥【Besides改为Second】I llike badminton because it can make me feel a sense of accomplishment.Yes,I love it and good at it.⑦【And改为Third】 because of badminton,I made many new friends.I like to playing badminton,I like watching badminton matches,too.⑧【The one of reason改为Whatsmore】 why I like badminton is that Olympic Games and the best badminton player in the China of the game is Lin Dan.Lin Dan is my idol,just because of him I began to like badminton.
However,the real reason why I like badminton is that play badminton can make my body better and better.Life depends on the sports.But for me,badminton is one of the meaning of my life.And playing badminton is not only can strengthen my body but
also make me excited and relaxed⑨【and strength my character】. Whenever I feel learning pressure of breath ,I will play badminton to relieve pressure.
⑩【Badminton is lots of fun and I hope everyone love badminton, too.】
Badminton is so funthat I hope everyone can try to love it and enjoy it!
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