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假设你是李华,你购买了一台联想牌笔记本电脑(LenovoY480TFI),因有质量问题要求该公司为你更换一台新电脑.请你根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件.要点:1.问题:电脑启动后噪

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假设你是李华,你购买了一台联想牌笔记本电脑(Lenovo Y480TFI ),因有质量问题
要求该公司为你更换一台新电脑.请你根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件.
要点:1.问题:电脑启动后噪音过大,出现自动关机现象;  型号新,无备件,无法维修;
该产品在购买点已售完,至少三个月才能更换;
 2.要求:公司尽快予以更换.
注意:1.词数100左右;
  2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数.
参考词汇:备件spare parts        最新型号 the latest model.
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Dear Sir,
     I am writing to you for the laptop of Lenovo Y480 TFT I bought on 20th September 2015 at Suning in Wuhan.
     Ten days after I bought it,it didn't work well as expected.First of all,a loud noise appeared after it ran. To make matters worse,sometimes it shut off by itself.I had no choice but to take it to the seller,but was informed that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one.(高分句型一)Later I could not help but turn to a repairman.He explained to me that since it was the latest model in China,it was almost impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that.I also can't tolerate the thought of waiting such a long time.As a consequence,I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
     I would appreciate it very much if you could take my request into consideration.(高分句型二)An early reply at your convenience is expected.
                                                       Sincerely yours,
                                                       Li   Hua