修改一下语法错误很急明天要用!WhenIranintothehouseIheardthevoiceofGork:‘Surrender!投降吧[sə'rendə]Icalledmyfriends!’‘Youareadeadduck’Gorkroared.'WhentheGorktoattacked,hiseyebegantoache.‘

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修改一下语法错误很急明天要用!
When I ran into the house I heard the voice of Gork:‘Surrender!投降吧[sə'rendə]I called my friends!’‘You are a dead duck ’Gork roared.'When the Gork to attacked,his eye began to ache.‘My eye!My eye had injured.'Gork cought me imiediatly.And then his eye began more and more red.I said friendly:‘I think you probably got pinkeye.I can help you!’‘Realy?’Gork said with worry.‘Trust me!’…Two days later …Gork:‘Thank you!Nobody you are an honest man.I’m sorry that I have rude to you.’‘This is what I should do.’said me.‘Can I hand over a friend with you?’‘Yes!’…Then l became Gork’s friend and alway’sent e-mail with him

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When I ran into the house I heard the voice of Gork:''Surrender!I‘ve called my friends!You are a dead duck !'' Gork roared.When Gork attacked,his eyes began to ache.''My eyes!My eyes were injured.''Gork cought me immediately.And then his eyes began to be more and more red.I said friendly:‘I think you probably got pinkeye.I can help you!'' ''Realy?''Gork said with worry.''Trust me!''…Two days later …Gork said:''Thank you!Nobody but you are an honest man.I’m sorry that I've been rude to you.'' ''This is what I should do.''I said.''Can I make friends with you?'' ''Yes!''…Then l became Gork’s friend and always send him e-mails.