求一篇英语短文改错一篇英语改错Itwasabouteightintheevening.ItwasrainingheavysoIhadtostayathome.Iwasreadingtheinterestingnovelinmyroom.Suddenly,thebellrang.Iimmediatelyrosetomyfoottoanswerit.Tomysurpri

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求一篇英语短文改错
一篇英语改错
It was about eight in the evening.It was raining heavy so I had to stay at home.I was reading the interesting novel in my room.Suddenly,the bell rang.I immediately rose to my foot to answer it.To my surprise,it was a stranger,who stood there,looked a little of shy."Is there anything I can do for you,sir?" I asked."Um,I'm sorry for interrupting,and I am dying about something to drink." "Wait a minute." I said,but when I returned a glass of water,the man is nowhere to be found.How a stranger man he was!
短文内有十处错误
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Answer 1

It was about eight in the evening.It was raining heavy(改heavily） so I had to stay at home.I was reading the（改为an） interesting novel in my room.Suddenly,the bell rang.I immediately rose to my foot（改为feet） to answer it.To my surprise,it was a stranger,who stood there,looked（改为looking） a little of（去掉of） shy."Is there anything I can do for you,sir?" I asked."Um,I'm sorry for interrupting,and（该为but） I am dying about （改为for）something to drink." "Wait a minute." I said,but when I returned(加wiht） a glass of water,the man is（改为was） nowhere to be found.How（改为what） a stranger man he was!
注：1.在阅读英文原著时常会遇到stay home和stay at home这两个不同的表达方式,都是可以的.
在go home,arrive home,get home这些短语中,home是副词,表示方向或目的地,而不表示位置.但在美国英语中,人们有时使用home来表示位置（在家）.而在英国英语中,人们是用at home来表达这层意思的.所以我们常常会遇到home和at home的情况.
2.rise to one's feet站起
3.）...be dying for sth（口语）渴望……,be dying to do sht