明天英文介绍短文,请大师帮忙看看有无错误,表述是否合理,求修改,NowIwillintroducemyselfbriefly.Mynameisxxx.Iamxxyearsold,borninAnhuiProvince.IgraduatedfromUESTC.Mymajorisconstructionalengineering.AndIgo

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明天英文介绍短文,请大师帮忙看看有无错误,表述是否合理,求修改,
Now I will introduce myself briefly.My name is xxx.I am xx years old,born in Anhui Province.I graduated from UESTC.My major is constructional engineering.And I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2001.
In July 2001,I worked in JSLC.And in March 2010,I left from Gansu and worked in Hainan Spaceport of XSLS.Hainan island is very good place with the endless sea,soft beach and bright sunshine.It has warm temperature,beautiful flowers and sweet fruits all the year round.Welcome to hainan.
Now we are struggling on the front line of construction,exposing to the weather.Though it is very hard to work on site,I feel strongly happy.I love my job,and I am very proud of rooting in hainan island and contributing to the construction of the aerospace industry of our country.
That's all.Thanks.
离开甘肃应该翻译成leave GANSU还是Leave from gansu啊？

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Now I will introduce myself briefly. My name is xxx. I am xx years old,born in Anhui Province. I graduated from UESTC. My major is constructional engineering. And I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2001.
In July 2001,I worked in JSLC. And in March 2010,I left Gansu and worked in Hainan Spaceport of XSLS. Hainan island is a very good place with the endless sea around it ,nice beaches and bright sunshine. It has a mild climate ,beautiful flowers and sweet fruits all the year round. Welcome to hainan.
Now we are struggling on the front line of construction,exposed to all kinds of weather. Though it is very hard to work on the site,I feel very happy. I love my job,and I am very proud of settling down on hainan island and making contributions to the construction of the aerospace industry of our country.
That's all.Thanks.