Intoday’ssociety,manyhotelswheretheystand,Intoday’ssociety,manyhotelswheretheystand,rushfromallkindsoffood,inFujian,Sichuan,Guangdong,Shandong…evendishesofItaly,Japanesecuisine,Koreanfoodandso

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In today’s society,many hotels where they stand,
In today’s society,many hotels where they stand,rush from all kinds of food,in Fujian,Sichuan,Guangdong,Shandong…even dishes of Italy,Japanese cuisine,Korean food and so

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In today’s society,many hotels where they stand,rush from all kinds of food,in Fujian,Sichuan,Guangdong,Shandong…even dishes of Italy,Japanese cuisine,Korean food and so on．
首先,这句话非常的中式英语化.
1.In today's society很中式,不过,还能说得过去.
2.many hotels where they stand,这句话为什么有一个从句?where they stand 是指谁?
如果你前文中提到了一个可以用they指代的人群,那么stand后面也不需要有逗号.直接加谓语.
3.rush from 这个用得到不准确,我不知道你想表达什么意思.大概是想说hotels有很多食物?看看我的句子中的表达方法.
4.all kinds of＝all sorts of 都可以
5.后面你提到的几个地名是想说食物的风格来源地吧.那就不能用“in”了.如果你非想保留你这种表达的话,可以说from.
Modified Version:
In today's society,many hotels provide consumers with food origining from all sorts of geographic areas,ranging from Fujian,Sichuan,Guangdong,Shandong,and even foreign areas including Italy,Japan,Korea,and so on.