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这句话有语病吗MynameisXXX,majoredinfinanceSchoolofInternationalBusiness,whoiscurrentlystudyinginSichuanInternationalStudiesUniversity(SISU).

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这句话有语病吗
My name is XXX,majored in finance School of International Business,who is currently studying in Sichuan International Studies University (SISU).
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表达很中国化,老外看了应该会别扭.建议改成:
My name is XXX, who is now studying in Sichuan International Studies University (SISU) of China, major in International Business,.
一点浅见,欢迎点评.