helloeveryone.I’mverygladtointroducemyselftoyouhere.IamWangQiangfromXi'anofChina.IhadbeenherethreetimesfortheD-FasSystemLastyear.Butallisshort-term.ThistimeIwillstayherefor3yearstomaintenanceD-FasSystemand

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hello everyone.
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you here.
I am Wang Qiang from Xi'an of China.
I had been here three times for the D-Fas System Last year.But all is short-term.This time I will stay here for 3 years to maintenance D-Fas System and to do the relevant jobs of G-Fas.
I feel happy that I have the opportunity to work with all of you ,and to provide service and support for you with Mr.Tong.
As you know,D-Fas is a big and complex computer system.At present,I am not very familiar with it,so during the First period I will study D-Fas and assist Mr.Tong in maintenancing D-Fas．My first aim is to do this job independently in one year．
Besides,Everything here is strange and challenging for me.but I am full of passion.I wish to adapt myself to the new circumstances and the new position as soon as possible,so that I can independently work for you as soon as possible.
Of course,I need to learn from all of you,and with your help I believe that I will become mature quickly.In Fact,everyone here will become my teacher,and I am looking forward to your advice.
Before comming here,I have had great hope to this beautiful place.I sincerely hope that I can get along with you harmoniously.And I will try my best to provide the best service to you.I believe This 3-years will be my most memorable experience in my life.
Well ,in my spare time ,I like writing Chinese calligraphy and Chinese painting.So if you like,I am very glad to give you one.
Finally,I hope I can make good friends with you in future.
Ok,that is all,thank you for your attention.

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Good.
I am pleased to introduce themselves here.
I come from China's Xi'an.
I would like to have three days to the D - Fas system last year year.but all short-term term.this time,I will stay here three years in the maintenance of the D - Fas system and do the work,grams - in the Fas.
I think glad that I have the opportunity to work with all of you and provide services and support for you and Mr.Tang.
As you know,for D - in the Fas is a large and complex computer system.at now,I am not very familiar with,so in the first period,I will look into the D - Fas and assistance to Mr.Tang in the maintenancing D - fas .my first aim is to do this work is an independent operation of 2001.
In addition,here are all challenging.But I is full of passion.I would like to adapt to their new circumstances and new position,as soon as possible,so that I can work independently,to contact you as soon as possible.
Of course,I have to learn all of you and request your help,I think I will soon become mature.In fact,you will become my teacher,I look forward to your views.
Before coming here,I have great hope,sincerely hope that I can live in harmony,I will do my best to provide you with the best services.I believe these three years in my life,I will be the most unforgettable experience.
In my spare time,I like to write Chinese calligraphy and painting Chinese painting if you like,I will be very pleased.
Finally,I hope I can in the future and you become good friends.
Determined that this is all,thank you for your concern.
帮你修改了一下,说实话有些地方我有点看不懂你所要表达的意思,有点乱.