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Iagreethatthetraditionalculturewillbereplacedbymodernscience,but,whistthetraditionalcultureneverwillbelossbyreasonofmoderntechnologyarealteringtheworld.Ofcrucialimportance,inmyopinion,ishowwedefine‘thetraditional

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I agree that the traditional culture will be replaced by modern science,but,whist the traditional culture never will be loss by reason of modern technology are altering the world.
Of crucial importance,in my opinion,is how we define ‘the traditional culture’.At it is simplest ,it could mean owning centuries-old history and culture.In china,people consider only when the culture are protected by government can people accept this culture within the traditional culture include many various aspects,for example,building,food,clothes and language etc.These would be the basic definition.
On the other side ,the modern technology made people who acquire abundant economic advantages whilst aiding people reduce paying of labour.I think the greatest invention which are not phone,electricity ,computer or lamp to farmer who think the greatest invention should be tractor and electric loom.Some people say what the agriculture is not the traditional culture.However,people should comprehend that the agriculture had oldest culture of history in the world.
The traditional mode was replaced by the modern high technology in the agriculture.In the other aspects,for instance ,the traditional mail was superseded by E-mail,the telegraph was superseded by telephone,by these examples,we know the world are transforming by the modern technology.Some opinions consider that the traditional culture are injured by the modern technology.I think that traditional culture are replaced by some modern technology ,however,in the fact ,the traditional culture are not being loss,also,by the government ceaseless support to protect traditional culture whilst adding citizen’s consciousness of protecting of culture heritage.
By the previous analyse ,it is easy understanding that the modern technology and traditional culture is various concepts.We all may obtain advantages of both the modern technology an traditional culture.
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