英语演讲TheInternetisagoodthing,wecanuseittolearn,piaygames,watchcartoons,listentomusicandsoon.But,weusuallyuseittoplaygames,nottolearn,so,sometimesourparentspunishus.Why?Becauseifweplayalotofcomputergames,our

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The Internet is a good thing,we can use it to learn,piay games,watch cartoons,listen to music and so on.But,we usually use it to play games,not to learn,so,sometimes our parentspunish us.Why?Because if we play a lot of computer games,our eyes will be bad and our study will be bad too,We are students,the main task is to learn,and,the network is still a dangerous fantasy world.So,we should use the Internet to help study.
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The Internet is a good thing,we can use it to learn,play games,watch cartoons,listen to music and so on.But,we usually use it to play games,not to learn.so,sometimes our parents punish us.Why?Because if we play a lot of computer games,our eyes will be bad and our study will be bad too.We are students,the main task is to learn,and,the network is still a dangerous fantasy world .We are also a small,easily addicted to Internet games .So,we should use the Internet to help study.

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The Internet is a useful,modern and electrical tool.It has a wide application.We can use it to seach for knowledge,play games,watch cartoons,listen to music and so on.However,some students always indulge themselves in computer games;they didn't use the Internet properly.As a result,the parents will not be satisfied with their children.They even punish their children for the indulgence.They have sufficient reasons.Too much computer games will have a bad effect on our eye sight and study.They say that,as students,our main duty is study.The Internet is a fabricated and alluring world.There may be some hidden dangers on the Internet.Sometimes we are too young to distinguish right and wrong.We are apt to be addicted in computer games.So we need to recognise this point.I believe we have the necessity to use the Internet properly.