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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
One day,an old man was returning home after shopping Suddenly,a bag of waste fell in the sky,nearly hitting him on his head.He was greatly frightening by the unexpected incident Dropped the things he had bought to the ground,he ran away rapidly.What dangerous it was!
Obviously,the accident caused by a careless neighbour living highly in an apartment.It was that person who was to blame for.Every one of us should behave politely and think more about other.Only when we each behaved properly can our society be changed into a pleasing one.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
One day,an old man was returning home after shopping Suddenly,a bag of waste fell in the sky,nearly hitting him on his head.He was greatly frightening by the unexpected incident Dropped the things he had bought to the ground,he ran away rapidly.What dangerous it was!
Obviously,the accident caused by a careless neighbour living highly in an apartment.It was that person who was to blame for.Every one of us should behave politely and think more about other.Only when we each behaved properly can our society be changed into a pleasing one.
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One day,an old man was returning home after shopping Suddenly,a bag of waste fell in the sky,nearly hitting him on his head.He was greatly frightening by the unexpected incident.Dropped the
from the frightened Dropping
things he had bought to the ground,he ran away rapidly.What dangerous it was!
How
Obviously,the accident∧caused by a careless neighbour living highly in an apartment.It was that person who was to blame for.Every one of us should behave politely and think more about other.
was high 去掉for others
Only when we each behaved properly can our society be changed into a pleasing one.
behave
1.in改为 from;考查介词,根据句意应该是"一袋垃圾从空中掉下来",故用from.
2.his改为 the;考查固定搭配,打在身体的某一部位用"hit sb on the…",这是固定用法.
3.frightening 改为frightened;考查分词作形容词,现在分词作形容词表主动,修饰物,描述事物的性质;过去分词作形容词表被动,修饰人,描述人的心理感受,这里注意是he,所以用frightened.
4.Dropped 改为Dropping;考查动词的分词,现在分词表主动,过去分词表被动;这里的drop这个动作由主语主动发出,所以用现在分词.
5.What改为 How;考查感叹句,感叹句有两种形式:一种是how+形容词形式,另一种是what+名词形式.这里dangerous是形容词,所以前面应该用how.
6.caused加上was;考查句子的语态,依据语境,accident和cause之间应是被动关系,要用被动语态.
7.highly改为 high;考查副词,high和highly都可用作副词,high表示具体的高度,highly主要表示很高的程度.这里指的是住在高处,所以用high.
8.去掉for;考查介词,blame sb for sth,为了某事责备某人,句子中介词for没有宾语,所以去掉for.
9.other改为 others;考查复数,句意为"我们做事要多考虑一下其他人",这里的"其他人"应该不止一个,所以要用复数.
10.behaved改为 behave;考查句子时态,这句是作者陈述的一个观点,应该用一般现在时;另外we each作主语时真正的主语是we,所以用动词原形.
from the frightened Dropping
things he had bought to the ground,he ran away rapidly.What dangerous it was!
How
Obviously,the accident∧caused by a careless neighbour living highly in an apartment.It was that person who was to blame for.Every one of us should behave politely and think more about other.
was high 去掉for others
Only when we each behaved properly can our society be changed into a pleasing one.
behave
1.in改为 from;考查介词,根据句意应该是"一袋垃圾从空中掉下来",故用from.
2.his改为 the;考查固定搭配,打在身体的某一部位用"hit sb on the…",这是固定用法.
3.frightening 改为frightened;考查分词作形容词,现在分词作形容词表主动,修饰物,描述事物的性质;过去分词作形容词表被动,修饰人,描述人的心理感受,这里注意是he,所以用frightened.
4.Dropped 改为Dropping;考查动词的分词,现在分词表主动,过去分词表被动;这里的drop这个动作由主语主动发出,所以用现在分词.
5.What改为 How;考查感叹句,感叹句有两种形式:一种是how+形容词形式,另一种是what+名词形式.这里dangerous是形容词,所以前面应该用how.
6.caused加上was;考查句子的语态,依据语境,accident和cause之间应是被动关系,要用被动语态.
7.highly改为 high;考查副词,high和highly都可用作副词,high表示具体的高度,highly主要表示很高的程度.这里指的是住在高处,所以用high.
8.去掉for;考查介词,blame sb for sth,为了某事责备某人,句子中介词for没有宾语,所以去掉for.
9.other改为 others;考查复数,句意为"我们做事要多考虑一下其他人",这里的"其他人"应该不止一个,所以要用复数.
10.behaved改为 behave;考查句子时态,这句是作者陈述的一个观点,应该用一般现在时;另外we each作主语时真正的主语是we,所以用动词原形.
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