帮忙看一下这英语作文有没有什么语法错误和不正确的地方Anothernewtermcomesagain,soIshouldhaveaplantoenrichmyself.Firstly,inordertoimprovemyEnglishlevel,Iwilldoalotofreading,becauseitcanbeveryeffective

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帮忙看一下这英语作文有没有什么语法错误和不正确的地方
Another new term comes again,so I should have a plan to enrichmyself.
Firstly,in order to improve my English level,I will do a lot ofreading,because it can be very effective in increasing the amount of Englishwords.Of course,watch American film is the same.If you want to improve yourEnglish,the most important is the usual accumulation.
Secondly,I should finish my homework more carefully than before.And i should pay more attention to the knowledge which I didn’t know it dearly.And then try to practice harder.
Finally,I will try to change myself to be more outgoing andpositive.
I believe my high school life will be very colorful.

Answer 1

Another new term comes again把comes 改为is coming

a lot ofreading改为  ofreading a lot

watch American film is the same改为wathing American films is the same...

the knowledge which I didn’t know it dearly 去掉 it 而且我不知道为什么要用dearly用so far 更好吧