帮忙润色一下这篇英语演讲稿,使它更口语化,更幽默介绍一件对你来说很重要的东西,我介绍我的相册.It'saphotoalbum,tomemeansalot,whichrecordingthefootprintofmylife.Letmeshowyou.Thisismymotherwhen

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帮忙润色一下这篇英语演讲稿,使它更口语化,更幽默
介绍一件对你来说很重要的东西,我介绍我的相册.
It's a photo album,to me means a lot,which recording the footprint of my life.Let me show you.
This is my mother when she is young.My friends who have read it all surprise that we look similar ,like carved out from the same mold.My mother is cute,she can be watching Korean dramas a whole day,forgetting to cook;she is passionate aboutgrowing vegetables,considering herself kind of vegetable is organic food.She is ineloquent,but i know she loves me.They are photos from the young to the present of me.It's also a gradual process to a fat person.
These are some of my travel photos,this is me and my girlfriends to imitate the shape of the Titanic in Pearl River,Guangzhou.She is my best friend,we struggle together in the entrance examination period.
This album is filled with my family and friendship ,two of the most precious things foe me.I will make it plump slowly in the rest time,which is the greatest wealth in my life.

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Let me show you a photo album,which records the footprint of my life.It means a lot to me.
This is my mother who looks like carved out from the same mold with me.My friends who have read it all surprised at that,it is a photo when she was young .Now,she is crszy about Korean dramas ,she can be watching it a whole day even forget to cook.These are some of my travelling photos,this is me and my girlfriends to imitate the shape of the Titanic in Pearl River,Guangzhou,also,she is my best friend,we struggle together in the entrance examination period.
This alhe bum is full of my memory ,one of the most precious things to me.I will treasure it all the time.
写相册的话妈妈的那部分可以少些一点,在加一些其他亲人的照片描述一下,就是语法错误有点多