帮忙看下英语作文,改下ALetterofThankstoMyparentsDearparents:Iamyourson.Iamwritingtheletterinordertoexpressmysincereappreciationforyourendlesslove,thankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforyourlove.Thememoryoflove

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帮忙看下英语作文,改下
A Letter of Thanks to My parents
Dear parents:
I am your son.I am writing the letter in order to express my sincere appreciation for your endless love,thank you from the bottom of my heart for your love.
The memory of love is always full of my brain again and again,especially one thing I never forgot it.In 2007,I hold enough confidence to join in the National College Entrance Examination.Unfortunately,the result let me so disappointed.I was unwilling to talk with anyone include your and deeply blame myself.But,what did your say moved me and gave me another chance to try.Next year,the result probably was kidding me.I was aware of failure come to me twice,then,everything was out of control so that I embraced your crying.However,the sweet words attracted me again,“it is not a big deal,don’t worry and just try”
Thank your love .Thank you of giving me the chance to step in college.Thank your warm words for me to relieve my bitterness,thank your of everything what you done for me.As the proverb goes:” The love more than I can say.” Therefore,it is high time to play a kind son to express my respect for your and to love your.I can never thank you enough.
Sincerely yours
Li Ming

Answer 1

thank you from the bottom...前面的逗号改成英语的句号好点
include your -include you
blame myself-blamed myself
what did you say-what you had say
was kiding-kided
was aware of -wasn't aware of
come to- comed to 我没有意识到失败会来两次
step in- step into 踏入
what you done-what you have done
for your and to love your-for you and to love you