帮我修改一下这篇自我介绍Hello,everyone.MynameisXXX.I’mXXyearsold.WhenIamfree,sometimesIlikelisteningtomusic,becauseitcanhelpmerelaxmybodyandmymind.SometimesIlikedrawingsomepictures,therefore,itisinterest

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帮我修改一下这篇自我介绍
Hello,everyone.My name is XXX.I’m XX years old.When I am free,sometimes I like listening to music,because it can help me relax my body and my mind.Sometimes I like drawing some pictures ,therefore ,it is interesting to put the real things on my paper.I love animals,expecially cats.we should care animals.Also,I’m a little girl who is a little shy,so I join in this contest to exercise myself.I’m fond of meeting more friends during this contest.
Meanwhile,I hope all of us can dowell in the contest.

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Hello,everyone.My name is XXX.I’m XX years old.In my spare time,I like listening to music,since it can help me not only unwind my stress but also adjust my mindset.likewise,I am lost in drawing pictures ,obvious is that it is interesting to put the real things on my papers.what's more,I love animals,expecially cats,I find they are cute and vivide.we should protect the animals.honstly to say,I’m a little girl who is a little bit shy,so I join in this contest to improve myself.I’m fond of meeting and making more friends during this contest.Thank you!