请帮忙看看这篇有没有语法错误,求修正.WequarreledOnOctober23th,sincehesaidthatwehavenocommonlanguage.That`stosay,hedidn`twanttotalkwithme.I`mindespair.AsfarasIamconcerned,Loveisaffectiveinteraction,andI

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请帮忙看看这篇有没有语法错误,求修正.
We quarreled On October 23th,since he said that we have no common language.That`s to say,he didn`t want to talk with me .I`m in despair.As far as I am concerned,Love is affective interaction,and I suddenly relized that my most intimate lover was a perfect stranger,I completely have no idea about his thoughts.And now ,we are in a different place ,doing different things,it seems that we have little or no interconnection.I`ll waiting for him until he contact me and break the standoff.Meanwhile I`m afraid that I will fade away from his memory.

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1.quarrel 后面加上 with each other,因为quarrel是不及物动词
2.第一行 On中O应小写
3.第三行中relized有错,应为realize,为了前后失态一致
4.第三行中intimate lover应该改为 intimate love,因为lover一般指“情人”,而love指“爱人”,前者有点不正当的情侣关系的意思
5.第四行 “ we are in a different place” 应为“ we are in different places”
6.第五行“I‘ll waiting” 改为“I’ll wait”
7.第五行“contact”改为“contacts”
8.第五行“break”改为“breaks”
文章本身写得很好啊,富有真挚的情感,重要的是读懂自己的心,看看那个人是不是值得你的等待,