英语高手啊,帮我解决下这个改错吧.nowwithdevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,peoplehaveawiderchoiceofsendgreetingstotheirfriendsandrelatives.Thetraditionalwayistosendgreetingcardsinfestivaloccasions,whichtake

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英语高手啊,帮我解决下这个改错吧.
now with development of science and technology ,people have a
wider choice of send greetings to their friends and relatives. The
traditional way is to send greeting cards in festival occasions,which
takes a bit longer ,but the familiar handwriting itself makes a friend be
happy,Now,it is more popular to send flowers,Thanks to the internet,
we can send e-cards instead of paper ones,Most of the e-cards are beautiful
designed and many have music and cartoon.And they can be sent and
receive almost the moment you click the button of "send".Anothe
r way is to send mobile phone messages,which,in my opinion,the
most convenient but therefore my favorite way of greeting a friend.

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traditional way is to send greeting cards in变on festival occasions,which
takes a bit longer ,but t 去掉the f amiliar handwriting itself makes a friend be
happy,Now,it is more popular to send flowers,Thanks to the internet,没错
we can send e-cards instead of paper ones,Most of the e-cards are beautiful +ly
designed and many have music and cartoon+s .And they can be sent and
receive+d almost the moment you click the button of "send".Anothe
r way is to send mobile phone messages,which,in my opinion,+ is the
most convenient but变and therefore my favorite way of greeting a friend.