帮我做一个改错.有九个错的.Theworldisdeveloping.Withdevelopment,moreandmorewealthisbeingproduced.Andatthesametimealotofvaluablethingsarebeinglost.Fisharedyingoutowningtothepollutingriversandlakes;forestisb

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帮我做一个改错.有九个错的.
The world is developing.With development,more and more wealth is being produced.And at the same time a lot of valuable things are being lost.Fish are dying out owning to the polluting rivers and lakes;forest is being lost owning to the trees being overcutting down.So fish and birds lose their homes and people will lose their very best friends.If such case continus,man alone can destroy himself.All this won’t happen during the day.
It’s time we stood up together,joining hands together and worked together to protect the world environment.Stop polluting the world,stop using any materials aimlessly.Only in this way can we create a new or comfortable home to the humankind and his friend-all the living thins.

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在with后加its
And--But/However
polluting--polluted
overcutting--overcut
very best--best
won't--doesn't
joining--joined
or--and或者:去掉or
friend--friends