修改文章(英文)Morespecifically,thefigure1illustratesthatdemandandsupplycurveforbeers.Ascanbeseen,weknoweachpricehasdifferentquantityofdemandandsupply,andwecanfindapointatEwhichthequantityofsupplyequalsdeman

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More specifically,the figure 1 illustrates that demand and supply curve for beers.As can be seen,we know each price has different quantity of demand and supply,and we can find a point at E which the quantity of supply equals demand,it is called market equilibrium.In other words,markets find the price to allocate efficiency.
According to the diagram,on one hand when the price of beer reach at 5￡ which exceed the price they think and they cannot afford,therefore quantity of demand is zero,nobody wish to buy beer.On other hand,the producers see the price and glad to provide 160 bottles of beer to buyers,because the price also prevails over the price they want.
以上两段文章是通过:price demand supply
5 0 160
4 40 120
3 80 80
2 120 40
1 160 0
这个关系写出来的,希望高手能帮我的文章优化下,我知道我写的不好,麻烦你们了,
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More specifically,figure one illustrates the supply and demand curve for beers.As one can see,each price corresponds to different values for supply and demand,and the market equilibrium is reached at point E,at which the numerical value for supply equals that of demand.In other words,markets use data like these to find prices that will maximize both efficiency and profit while lowering the cost.
Also,according to the diagram,one can see that when the price of beer reaches 5￡,it exceeds the expected price,and since common people cannot afford such expensive beer,the demand will eventually drop down to zero,as no one will want to buy beer.On the other hand,when prices are down as low as 1￡,the demand for beer is so high that supply simply cannot meet demand,and sinks to a value of 0.
In conclusion,it can be seen that supply and demand depend on each other,and that a slight change in one value can lead to drastic changes in the other.
如果要谈 Supply 和 Demand,一般都是把 supply 放前面 "supply and demand."
没有 allocate efficiency 这种说法的.应该用 "Maximize efficiency"
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