HiguysmynameisxxI'm18yearsold,andmyinterestsincludemusic,skateboarding,athleticsofalltypes,Aboutthefood,IliketoeatchickenbeefandicecreamAtlast,Iwanttosay:“Iwouldliketomakefriendswithyouall.Thankyou!请问这

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Hi guys my name is xx I'm 18 years old ,and my interests include music,skateboarding,athletics of all types,About the food,I like to eat chicken beef and ice cream At last,I want to say:“I would like to make friends with you all.Thank you!
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Hi everyone (guys比较太随便),my name is xx.I'm 18 years old.My interests include music,skateboarding,and sports (用sports会比较好一点).(不需要 about the food) My favorite foods include:chicken,beef and ice cream.( 最后一句太奇怪了.) 改做 I am pleased to meet everyone and hope we become good friends.Thank you!