求英语作文改错(3小时以内）Tobeapopularstudent.Weshouldbeepuippedwiththefollowingqualities.Firstofall,weshouldbewillingtohelpotherswhentheymeetsomedifficultproblems.Itmeansthatyou'refriendlyandclosetothem.A

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求英语作文改错(3小时以内）
To be a popular student.We should be epuipped with the following qualities.First of all,we should be willing to help others when they meet some difficult problems.It means that you're friendly and close to them.And everyone wants to make friends with you.Then we should always take part in some school activities and show yourself.That let everyone knows about you.You will be sunny and bright in their hearts.Besides,as a student,you should behave yourself and study hard in school.
Above all,you must be convenience and believe in yourself in this way can you make everyone convinced.As a result,I make sure you will become a popular student
and everyone want to learn from you.

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In order to be a popular student and make more friends,we should be epuipped with the following abilities,personalities and characteristics.First of all,we should be willing to help others when they encounter some difficult problems.It means that we should be friendly and close to other people so that everyone wants to make friends with us.Secondly,we should take part in school activities and show ourselves to let everyone know about us.Then we will be sunny and bright in their hearts.Besides,as a student,we should behave ourselves and study hard in school.Above all,we must be helpful and believe in ourselves in the way that we can make everyone convinced.As a result,it makes sure that we will become popular students and everyone wants to learn from us.