请高手查一下有无语法错误?一处追加10分!文章开始!StatementofCertificationThisistocertifythatABCisastudentofAccountingGradeThreeinourschool.Ourschoolhasvocationfrom10July2010to31August2010.Weknowthat

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Statement of Certification
This is to certify that ABC is a student of Accounting Grade Three in our school.
Our school has vocation from 10 July 2010 to 31 August 2010. We know that ABC will take a travel to European countries with his mother during the vocation.
All the above is confirmed.
A School,B district,C city
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Answer 1

1.This is to certify that ABC is a student of Accounting Grade Three in our school 中的专业与学年不能按中国话顺序来翻译,最好改成：
This is to certify that ABC is a junior majoring in Accounting of our school.
2.Our school has vocation from …… 学校放假还是用 Our school vocation is from ……比较好,更符合习惯