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time get away is to fast.and we haven't to make it go on.sometimes i think about that.I loss one who don't love me.but you ..loss the one who loves you.
One years.the sweet times go away too fast.we have changed is too fast too.we can't go back.and never come back.it's not only you mistake ,it's not only my mistake.it is a mistake all of us.we can't living in the passed.so.i take a choice to correct our mistakes.
all is over.say sorry to the passed time.say sorry to you and your furture.
goodbye my love forever
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how time flies!
we all missed the past period of time,but we can do nothing.I think ,i have missed (lost)the person who don't love me ,but you have missed(lost) the person who love you deeply !what a pity!
In the past one year ,we lived happily,but it finished so soon.although we all missed the past ,we can't get back ,and we can't change the fact now.it's not only your mistake but also my.It's a mistake which was made by we all!we can't living in the past time ,and i want to correct our mistakes .
everything is finished now.i have hurt you heart.i'm sorry,and i'm sorry to cause so many difficulties in your future.
goodbye ,my love
you are the only girl who i have loved in my heart ,forever.
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