关于中秋节英语作文改正Everybody:Todayismoonfestival.ThefestivalusuallyonseptemberorOctoberinChina.Onthisday,peoplealwayseatmooncakeandwatchmoonintheopenair.Nomatterwhereyouare.Nomatterwhatyoudo,f

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关于中秋节英语作文改正
Everybody:
Today is moon festival . The festival usually on september or October in China .On this day,people always eat moon cake and watch moon in the open air.No matter where you are.No matter what you do ,family nubers will together in this day.Look forward to the future and review the past when people get together.This is family's day. I hope you guys have a good day!
Best wish
Ken
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1， 开头不用everybody，应该用Dear xxx2，中秋节中国特有的，所以直译的Mid-autumn festival 更常用。3, 第二句缺乏谓语动词（系动词），The festival is usually on...4， 区别一下，this day； on this day； in...