谁帮我看下这段英语有什么问题谢谢Hello,everyone,todayiwilltalkaboutthedifferenceofgivingupseatsfortheoldorweakbetweeninChinaandinJapan.InChinaifayoungmanissittingonthebus,thereisaoldmanstanding

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谁帮我看下这段英语有什么问题 谢谢
Hello,every one ,today i will talk about the difference of giving up seats for the old or weak between in China and in Japan.In China if a young man is sitting on the bus , there is a old man standing beside him ,generally the young man quickly stand up to warmly give the old man his seat.But in Japan, if a young man do the same thing, he maybe deeply hurt other pride. Because Japanese have psychological who are against old , do not want to trouble others and do not want to be taken care of . Therefore, in Japan the best way is you can pretend you want to get off to go to the door, or simply go to another car, you only need to quietly stand up to walk away.

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Hello, everyone, today I will talk about the difference between offering your seat for the elderly in China and in Japan. In China, if a young man is sitting on the bus, and there is an elderly standing beside him, generally the young man would quickly stand up and offer his seat to the old man. But in Japan, if a young man did the same thing, he might deeply hurt the other's self esteem. Because the Japanese (have psychological who are against old看不太懂),do not want to trouble others and do not want to be taken care of. Therefore, in Japan the best way is for you to pretend that you want to get off the bus and go towards the door, or simply go to (another car “car” 是指？？), you only need to quietly stand up and walk away.