英语学的好的帮我修改一下我的作文HongKong,acityoftheimportantbusniessandeconomycentreintheworld,returnedtoChinaonJune1st,1997.LocatedinthenorthofChina,HongKongisconsistedof236island,thereinto,LantanIsl

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英语学的好的帮我修改一下我的作文
HongKong ,a city of the important busniess and economy centre in the world ,returned to China on June 1st ,1997 .Located in the north of China ,HongKong is consisted of 236 island ,thereinto ,Lantan Island is the largest of them .With the population of HongKong increased ,it has overed 660 millions .There are many famous sightseeing in HongKong ,which attract numberless nationwide visitors ,such as The Ocean Park ,a largest Theme Park in Asia ,and Disneyland ,Space Museum .All in all ,it is worthwhile for you to visit HongKong in vacation .

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With the population of HongKong increased ,it has overed 660 millions .感觉有点不地道