请修改一段英文,纠正语法,John:很抱歉把你卷入我们的事情之间,我希望事情真的像你说的那样.不过,事实上哨子的事只是很小的事,其实我根本没有放在心上,为什么我们还要为此纠缠?我们就

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请 修改一段 英文,纠正语法,
John:
很抱歉把你卷入我们的事情之间,我希望事情真的像你说的那样.
不过,事实上哨子的事只是很小的事,其实我根本没有放在心上,为什么我们还要为此纠缠?我们就不要再谈这件事了.
我通常晚上8点会去gym,除了星期二和周末,希望能见到你.
John:
I am sorry to keep you involved in the matter between us,I really hope that things going as what you said.
In fact,the whistle thing is only nothing.Actually I did not mind.How come we still struggle for it.
How about we just let it go.
I usually go to gym at 8:00pm,except the weekend and Tuesday.Hope to see you soom.
I wish you good luck.
综合了各位前辈意见，最后改作如下，
John:
I am sorry to have kept you involved in the matter between us.I really hope that things worked out as what you said.In fact,the whistle thing is just nothing.Actually I do not mind it .Why are we still sticking on it？How about we just let it go.
I usually go to gym at 8:00pm,except Tuesday and the weekends .Hope to see you soon.
Best wishes.

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I really hope that things going as what you said.
我希望事情真的像你说的那样.
这个最好修改一下
I really hope that things worked out as what you said.
In fact,the whistle thing is only nothing
不过,事实上哨子的事只是很小的事
only最好改成just
Actually I did not mind.
其实我根本没有放在心上
这个为了强调“根本”和现在你依然not mind,最好修改成
Actually I do not mind at all.
How come we still struggle for it?
为什么我们还要为此纠缠?
struggle是努力争取的意思.建议修改成
Why are we still sticking on it/pestering with it?
最后的一般祝你好运用
best wishes就可以了.
wish you a very good luck~
第一句我不确定用have kept 还是用 have gotten 合适?还是直接用 I am sorry to get you .：－）
用kept比较地道的.have kept是个完成时,强调了现在依然处于这个事件中.
Actually I did not mind it
这里还是建议不要用过去时,过去时表示对现在没有太大影响,用现在时比较好,表示你现在依然不在意.
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第二句以下两个表述都是前辈说的,我觉得都很好,不知道前辈如何看法?
I hope that things are really like what you said.
I really hope that things worked out as what you said.
>_