英语作文关于应故无法赴约,DearMaryIamexcessivelysorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbeabletocometomorrow.Thedayaftertomorrow,ismygrandmother'seightiethbirthday,butI'mstupid*thatIhaven'trecalled*ituntiltoday'smorning

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英语作文关于应故无法赴约,
Dear Mary
I am excessively sorry to tell you that I won't be able to come tomorrow .
The day after tomorrow ,is my grand mother's eightieth birthday,but I'm stupid* that I haven't recalled* it until today's morning ,at the moment ,my mother informed me by telephone that I should prepare the gift for grandmother.I realy have kept our date of my closest friends in my mind,however the present I need to buy at tommorow.
I only to regretfully*say sorry for you ,and please tell john and Rose the absence of me .Last I hope you have a good time.
your sincerely
stupid recalled regretfully 这三个感觉用的不是很恰当

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"but I'm stupid* that I haven't recalled* it until today's morning ,at the moment ,”可以改成 but I'm too careless to realize it until this morning that 后面直接跟 "my mother informed me ."这一句.
"I only to regretfully*say sorry for you ,"语法错了,改成：I'm sorry to say sorry to you.另外,regretfully是“后悔地”的意思,用在这里意思不对,表示歉意直接用sorry就可以了.
"and please tell john and Rose the absence of me ."这句没有问题,但是也可以这样用一个词组表达："and please inform John and Rose of my absence."
"your sincerely" 中your应该加 s 哦,然后要换行署你的名
总的来说 我觉得你写的挺好的,加油.