帮我看一下读不读得通或者有没有语法错误~最重要的是弟1篇~可以先看第1篇发表意见,其他的可以慢一点~Friendshipisakindofrelationshipthatmanyaccompanyyouallyourlife.Friendshipistoourlifewhatsalti

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帮我看一下读不读得通或者有没有语法错误~
最重要的是弟1篇~可以先看第1篇发表意见,其他的可以慢一点~
Friendship is a kind of relationship that many accompany you all your life.Friendship is to our life what salt is to dasher.When you are happy,friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad,friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble,friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you.I also have many friends.We play anything together,go home together,and we often go shopping in the weekend.And I feel happy when I with my friends.And I really know friendship isn't almighty,but no one can live happily without it.
Though I am occupied with my study,I would like to spend time on my hobbies,such as reading,playing computer games.
One of my favorite hobbies is playing the piano.Playing the piano has been in my life for many years.When I sad I will play it and because of it I will forget something let me sad.And when I happy I also play it to cheer .And I’m sure play the piano is most important ting in my life .They make my day-to day life wonderful and colorful.But I haven no more time to play it because I busy studying.And when I have my hobby I know the real mean of hobby.I think.It is something we like to do in our free time simply for the fun of it.The value in money is not important,but the pleasure it gives us is.
I am ’always busy with my lessons.What I have to do everyday is nothing but study.
Luckily,last summer my family went to the countryside it is very beautiful there.There are green plants,lovely animals and kind people.I can breathing the fresh air,listening to the birds singing,and enjoying the green trees,red flowers and the river.
During the holiday,I didn’t have to get up early,or didn’t need to finish many exercises.I can go fishing with my parents.And my parents ask me to do some farm work there.I know that’s they want to let me know what’s the nice life I have.We enjoyed a really interesting holiday there.I want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.

Answer 1

1.Friendship is to our life what salt is to dasher.
dasher是 猛冲者的意思,和你要表达的不一样吧,而且句式也不对．
我觉得你想说的应该是：Friendship to our life is what salt to dish.
2.And I feel happy when I with my friends
应该是And I feel happy when I am with my friends
3.When I sad I will play it
应该是:When I am sad I will play it
以及后面的when i happy 应该是:when I am happy
4.something let me sad
我觉得something makes me sad 更好
5.play the piano is most important ting in my life
应该是:playing the piano is most important ting in my life
6.I busy studying应该是:I am busy studying
7.the real mean of hobby中mean 应该是:meaning
8.last summer my family went to the countryside it is very beautiful there这是两句话,countryside 后面加句号,it 首字母大写.
9.I can breathing the fresh air,listening to the birds singing,and enjoying the green trees,red flowers and the river.
应该是:I can breathe the fresh air,listen to the birds singing,and enjoy the green trees,red flowers and the river.
10.I know that’s they want to let me know what’s the nice life I have.应该是:I know that they want to let me know what a nice life I have.