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帮我订正和修改这篇英文自我介绍以下是我自己写的去外航面试的自我介绍,题目是为什么想做这个职位和以后的目标.WhenIwaskid.Beingastewardess’becomingoneofmypossibledreams.Flyingintheskyand
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帮我订正和修改这篇英文自我介绍
以下是我自己写的去外航面试的自我介绍,题目是为什么想做这个职位和以后的目标.
When I was kid .Being a stewardess’ becoming one of my possible dreams.Flying in the sky and wear beautiful set.Always keep smiling and look good.But it’s a kind of faraway from me at that time.But I always wait for the chance.
I am outgoing kind person and get on well with others.I make friends in college and take part in community activities.I also do part time jobs to gain my society experience.I used worked in restaurant as a waitress for 3 month and I really learn much from it.I listen to music and draw sometime.I have skilled at painting even though I have never been taught.
For the reason I am interested in languages I choose Korean to be my specialized field in university.For the 4 years’ study I am more skilled on it and get to know Korean better.I think it’s really do help to the flight attendants work.
I interested in learning things.In the best year of my life I think there’s no time to lose and I have to find a work that fit me the best and been worth to devoted to all of my life.Asiana Airlines is a famous global airline company and I think that’s the place to make my dreams come true.It’s the chance that I always keep waiting for.That’s the reason why I’m applying for this position.
If I enrolled by Asiana Airlines I will try my best to be a competent flight attendants.I will keep smiling to everyone and serve passengers with no complain.Try to communicate with others and be honest to others.Improve myself while I’m study.For the unique goal of my life I will try my best to make my dream come true.
I am confident that I am qualified for the position and if you made the decision you will be no regrets with it!Think you.
本人对这篇自我介绍不是很自信,希望能只出错误并给予更专业的修正,能够有所补充更好^_^
以下是我自己写的去外航面试的自我介绍,题目是为什么想做这个职位和以后的目标.
When I was kid .Being a stewardess’ becoming one of my possible dreams.Flying in the sky and wear beautiful set.Always keep smiling and look good.But it’s a kind of faraway from me at that time.But I always wait for the chance.
I am outgoing kind person and get on well with others.I make friends in college and take part in community activities.I also do part time jobs to gain my society experience.I used worked in restaurant as a waitress for 3 month and I really learn much from it.I listen to music and draw sometime.I have skilled at painting even though I have never been taught.
For the reason I am interested in languages I choose Korean to be my specialized field in university.For the 4 years’ study I am more skilled on it and get to know Korean better.I think it’s really do help to the flight attendants work.
I interested in learning things.In the best year of my life I think there’s no time to lose and I have to find a work that fit me the best and been worth to devoted to all of my life.Asiana Airlines is a famous global airline company and I think that’s the place to make my dreams come true.It’s the chance that I always keep waiting for.That’s the reason why I’m applying for this position.
If I enrolled by Asiana Airlines I will try my best to be a competent flight attendants.I will keep smiling to everyone and serve passengers with no complain.Try to communicate with others and be honest to others.Improve myself while I’m study.For the unique goal of my life I will try my best to make my dream come true.
I am confident that I am qualified for the position and if you made the decision you will be no regrets with it!Think you.
本人对这篇自我介绍不是很自信,希望能只出错误并给予更专业的修正,能够有所补充更好^_^
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My name is ..., I am 22 now. I must say that it is a very great opportunity for me to get this interview. Thank you very much.
To be a stewardess is always one of my dreams since I was still a child. and today ,I am such close to my dream. So I am very happy today.
Flying in sky , wearing beautiful suit, travelling between different areas,even different countries were the first image that the job of stewardess had given me. And I like beauty, I like sky, i also like travelling. So I think stewardess is the very good job for me.
Then I was servered by a stewardess when I first took an airplane. The warm care, the patient and helpful answer, the gentle service and the calm performance when met a turbulence, these really touched me. The thinking of a stewardess changed in my mind. I realize that with the beauty suit, and the angle-like smilling ,there must be a very kind heart inside, With the flying in sky, they must be so brave and have great sence of responsibility to overcome the fear of potential danger. So I think stewardess is a very esteemed job and I want to be one of them more.
For me, I think I meet the physical demands first.
Second, I am an outgoing and kind-hearted person. I always get on well with others and I like making friends. In college school, I also took part in community activities.
And third, I have a clear plan for my carrer. So I did part-time jobs,such as waitress, to enrich my society experience. I used to worked in a restaurant as a waitress for 3 months and that really helped me to learn a lot.
As for my hobby, I like listening to music, painting and doing sports .I am also interested in languages, and I choosed Korean to be my specialized field in university. 4 years’ study of Korean , I can use this language well. I think it really do help to the flight attendants work.
Asiana Airlines is a famous global airline company, and I just think this is the very place to make my dreams come true. It gives the chance that I have been always waiting for. So I applied for this position.
I have confidence to be a competent flight attendants. With my smile,my service, my brave heart and sence of responsibility, I have confidence to get esteem for myself and my company. and also get the passengers' satisfaction.
Thank you very much.
To be a stewardess is always one of my dreams since I was still a child. and today ,I am such close to my dream. So I am very happy today.
Flying in sky , wearing beautiful suit, travelling between different areas,even different countries were the first image that the job of stewardess had given me. And I like beauty, I like sky, i also like travelling. So I think stewardess is the very good job for me.
Then I was servered by a stewardess when I first took an airplane. The warm care, the patient and helpful answer, the gentle service and the calm performance when met a turbulence, these really touched me. The thinking of a stewardess changed in my mind. I realize that with the beauty suit, and the angle-like smilling ,there must be a very kind heart inside, With the flying in sky, they must be so brave and have great sence of responsibility to overcome the fear of potential danger. So I think stewardess is a very esteemed job and I want to be one of them more.
For me, I think I meet the physical demands first.
Second, I am an outgoing and kind-hearted person. I always get on well with others and I like making friends. In college school, I also took part in community activities.
And third, I have a clear plan for my carrer. So I did part-time jobs,such as waitress, to enrich my society experience. I used to worked in a restaurant as a waitress for 3 months and that really helped me to learn a lot.
As for my hobby, I like listening to music, painting and doing sports .I am also interested in languages, and I choosed Korean to be my specialized field in university. 4 years’ study of Korean , I can use this language well. I think it really do help to the flight attendants work.
Asiana Airlines is a famous global airline company, and I just think this is the very place to make my dreams come true. It gives the chance that I have been always waiting for. So I applied for this position.
I have confidence to be a competent flight attendants. With my smile,my service, my brave heart and sence of responsibility, I have confidence to get esteem for myself and my company. and also get the passengers' satisfaction.
Thank you very much.
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