改正英文[谢绝非高手]Love,yousay,iswhatyoufindthemostwonderfulthingintheworldbetweenmenandwomen.I,inadegree,couldn'tagreemore.However,I'dsay"Loveforme?No,thanks."Asforlove,Ineednomorethanone,onewhoIcanbewith

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改正英文[谢绝非高手]
Love,you say,is what you find the most wonderful thing in the world between men and women.I,in a degree,couldn't agree more.However,I'd say"Love for me?No,thanks."As for love,I need no more than one,one who I can be with for ever and a day.We now can be much more than just friends,but we can't never be love and lover.Should I love someone,I would love her heart and soul,I would love her silently and openly,I would love her as my lifelong partner.Before that,I would be all alone.So at this duration of time,I would show no love to you,even if you've taken up more than 27% of room of my heart,even if I've being dreaming of your smiles in both days and nights for more times than I can count.3 years later or so,we are doomed to walk our own ways,you on yours while I on mine and that is what I cannot afford.
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Love,you say,is what you find the most beautiful thing in the world between men and women.I,to a degree,couldn't agree more.However,I'd say"Love for me?No,thanks."As for love,I need no more than one,one who I can be with for ever or a day.We now can be more than friends,but we can't never be loved .Should I love someone,I would love her heart and soul,I would love her silently and openly,I would love her as my lifelong- partner.Before that,I would be all alone.So at this duration of time,I would show no love to you,even if you've taken up more than 27% of room of my heart,even if I've dreamt of your smiles in both days and nights for much more times than I can count.3 years later or so,we are doomed to walk our own ways,you are on yours while I am on mine and that is what I cannot afford.