在光明里,你看到我的脸,像一朵花一样的娇艳带着香,带着刺,还有微笑在黑暗中,我看到自己的心,像一朵花一样的苍白没有疼痛,没有眼泪,只有平静.下面是我自己翻的：Inthesunshine,Iseeyourface

Question

在光明里,你看到我的脸,像一朵花一样的娇艳
带着香,带着刺,还有微笑
在黑暗中,我看到自己的心,像一朵花一样的苍白
没有疼痛,没有眼泪,只有平静.
下面是我自己翻的：
In the sunshine,I see your face,
like a delicate and charming flower
with fragrant,thron and smile;
In the dark,I see my heart,
like a paleness of flower,
without pain and tear,
only left calmness.
希望帮我改一下

Answer 1

I see your face in the sunshine,it just looks like a charming flower with fragrant,thron and smile.
I see my heart under the darkness,it looks like a painful flower without pain and tears but just calmness