一片流水账英文作文,求人改错,主要作文如下,是我哥让我写去他家的所见,关系到我出国,BecauseofsomeStudyabroadquestions,icametomybrather'shometoask.mybratherwasstudyingabroad,so,ithoughhecanhelpmeou

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一片流水账英文作文,求人改错,主要作文如下,是我哥让我写去他家的所见,关系到我出国,
Because of some Study abroad questions,i came to my brather's home to ask.my brather was studying abroad,so,i though he can help me out those questions.i always want to study abroad,then i can learn more knowleage,and meet more friends,see more things that i never met,maybe a australian girl.hope i can dream come ture,and get out of god damn place
我的主要中心是
因为一些留学的问题,我去我哥哥家去问他,他曾经是个留学生,所以我觉得他能帮我解决这些问题,我常想去想外国学习,这样我就可以学习更多知识,交更多的朋友,还能增长见识,说不定还能遇见一个澳大利亚的妞,多么希望我的梦想能够成真,这样就能离开这个鬼地方了、
改的好的,500分加赏,我还1000多分

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