这篇英语读后感有语法错误么,Thiswinter,Ireadabookcalled"Charlotte'sWeb".Thisstorytouchedme.Ithinkthefeelingsbetweenpeopleishigherthanthemountains.InWeibulldidn'twanttodieawail,Charlotteastrong"Isaveyou"imp

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这篇英语读后感有语法错误么,
This winter,I read a book called "Charlotte's Web".This story touched me.I think the feelings between people is higher than the mountains.In Weibull didn't want to die a wail,Charlotte a strong" I save you" impressed me deeply.Just for this promise,Charlotte devoted all her energy into them,until the moment of death,also does not seek anything in return.I think Sherlock is an example to us,we should sincerely treat a friend,try to help a friend

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Charlotte a strong" I save you" 有修改的必要.
建议:"I save you" said Charlotte determinedly which 然後加下半句.
Charlotte devoted all her energy into "it" 因为 "promise" 是单数.
we should sincerely treat a friend,"and" try to help a friend 是两句子须要连接词 "and" 连接起来或 "try" 加 "ing"