求英语高手揪语法错误LearntofaceIrememberwhenIwasinelementary[,ɛlə'mɛntərɪ]schoolIwasafraidexam.Eachtimetakesaexam.Iwastension['tɛnʃən]andfear.I'mafraidtoseeparent’sdisap

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求英语高手揪语法错误
Learn to face
I remember when I was in elementary [,ɛlə'mɛntərɪ] school I was afraid exam.Each time takes a exam .I was tension ['tɛnʃən] and fear.I'm afraid to see parent’s disappointed [,dɪsə'pɔɪntɪd] eye.Middle school later,Tony always said “ don't be afraid to exam.try your best .You will win the exam.” Now I'm not afraid of exam.I put the exam as a chance to prove myself .
I only have overcome [,ovɚ'kʌm] the fear,the dream won‘t end.I should learn to face

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Learn to face
I remember when I was in elementary school I was afraid of exam.Each time I took an exam .I was tensional and fearful.I was afraid to see parents’ disappointed [,dɪsə'pɔɪntɪd] eyes.After middle school later,Tony always said “ don't be afraid of exam.try your best and then you will win the exam.” Now I'm not afraid of exam.I consider the exam as a chance to prove myself .
I only just overcame [,ovɚ'kʌm] the fear,the dream won‘t end.I should learn to face
注,be afraid of 害怕 .紧张的要用形容词 tensional或nervous 另外注意时态的一致和变换