2013年4月20日，一场突如其来的严重地震袭击了四川省雅安市。请写一封倡议书，号召同学们为灾区捐款，要点如下：·据报道，雅安市遭受严重地震灾害·号召同学们积极捐

Question

2013年4月20日，一场突如其来的严重地震袭击了四川省雅安市。请写一封倡议书，号召同学们为灾区捐款，

要点如下：· 据报道，雅安市遭受严重地震灾害

· 号召同学们积极捐款捐物

· 联系方式

要求：（1）包括所有内容

（2）倡议书开头已写好（不计入总词数）

（3）词数不少于80

（4）在答题卡上作答

A Proposal to My Schoolmates

My dear schoolmates

It is reported that

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

It is reported that April 20th 2013 witnessed a horrible and severe earthquake in Ya’an Sichuan Province. Hundreds of thouands people killed people killed or injured countless houses and farmlands destroyed and public transportation paralyzed the catastrophe has caused great loss and inconvenienceWhen disaster stikes help comes from all sides. It is high time we carried forward the fine tradition to help out fellowmen out of the disater. As high school students we have the duty to give a hand in emergency and send love to warm their heartsAll the donation will be transferred in a timely manner to the earthquake-stricken area. Anyone who’d like to donate money and goods is expected to contact the office of the Student Union at 65400000. Looking forward to your attention and participation

分 析：
考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体 故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语Hundreds of thouands数以万计的；have the duty to 有责任做某事；give a hand 给予帮助；Looking forward to盼望着；It is reported that April 20th 2013 witnessed a horrible and severe earthquake in Ya’an Sichuan Province这个句子用到it is reported that 据报道这个句型结构；It is high time we carried forward the fine tradition to help out fellowmen out of the disater.这个句子中考查it is high time that 应该是做某事的时间了；Anyone who’d like to donate money and goods is expected to contact the office of the Student Union at 65400000这个句子who引导anyone的定语从句；
考点：
提纲类作文