英语翻译四级英语翻译刺绣（Embroidery）是中国艺术的一颗璀璨明珠,在秦汉时期就已达到较高的水平.它是一门传统工艺,有各种样式,广泛分布于中国的各个地区.有些精致（elaborate）绣品需要

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英语翻译
四级英语翻译
刺绣（Embroidery）是中国艺术的一颗璀璨明珠,在秦汉时期就已达到较高的水平.它是一门传统工艺,有各种样式,广泛分布于中国的各个地区.有些精致（elaborate）绣品需要花费几位熟练技工数月甚至数年才能完成.在服饰文化中,刺绣工艺占有重要地位.它不仅是中国传统艺术和手工艺的瑰宝,也是中华文化的重要组成部分.它代表了中国人民的智慧.
我这样翻译有什么不妥的地方吗?
Embroidery is a brilliant pearl of Chinese art,which had already reached a high level in the Qin and Han dynasties.Embroidery is a traditional craft with diverse styles,which spread over the different regions of China.Some elaborate crafts request several technicians with months even years to be finished.Embroidery craft occupies the major position in costume culture,it is not only the treasure of Chinese traditional arts and crafts,but also the important part of Chinese culture.It represents Chinese wisdom

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Embroidery is a brilliant pearl of Chinese art,(whose skills) had already reached a high level (by the end of) the Qin and Han dynasties.Embroidery is a traditional craft with diverse styles,which spread(s )over the different regions of China.(It may cost several months or even years of skillful works to finish the elaborate crafts).Embroidery craft occupies the major position in costume culture,it is not only the treasure of Chinese traditional arts and crafts,but also the important part of Chinese culture.It represents Chinese wisdom.
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