以下这些句子有语法错误吗?HK,notonlyisashoppingparadise,butalsoaplacetostudy.PrefaceThisisthefirsttimeIhavemydiaryinEnglish.Asforme,Irarelykeepdiaries,beusedtokeepdiariesinCineseaslongasIwrote.

Question

以下这些句子有语法错误吗?
HK,not only is a shopping paradise,but also a place to study.
Preface This is the first time I have my diary in English.As for me,I rarely keep diaries,be used to keep diaries in Cinese as long as I wrote.

Answer 1

第一个句子,not only .but also 连接成分要对称
可改为：HK is not only a shopping paradise,but also a place to study.
另外也可用 not only 开头的句子,这样就要用倒装句
Not only is HK a shopping paradise,but also it is a place to study .
第二句 改为 ：“ This is the first time that I have kept my diary in English .As for me ,I rarely keep diaries.I used to keep diaries in Chinese."
错误一：this is the first time that sb has done sth
错误二：be used to 是习惯于 而used to do 是过去常常的意思
要是句意是 只要写日记我习惯用汉语写,那就得改成 I am used to keeping diaries in Chinese as long as I keep them .
要是理解成我以前总是拿汉语记日记 就直接改为 I used to keep diaries in Chinese .