请帮我修改一下这篇英文电子邮件DearxxMynameisxxx,andIamstudyinginChinanow,IwantyousendmeaPaperApplicationPackageofyouruniversity.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou.cheersxxxx请帮忙看看有没有语法

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请帮我修改一下这篇英文电子邮件
Dear xx
My name is xxx ,and I am studying in China now,I want you send me a Paper Application Package of your university.
I am looking forward to your reply.Thank you.
cheers
xxxx
请帮忙看看有没有语法错误,或者格式错误,如果有更好的表达也请帮忙修改.还有我想加进去我现在在中国就读A-level课程,应该加在哪里如何加,请把改好的发出来,
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Dear xx
My name is xxx ,and I am a Chinese High School student right mow. I would like you to send me a Paper Application Package of your university ASAP.
Thank you.
cheers
xxxx