这样一来,我想一切都会变得成功和有效,比如培养健全的人格..英语句子修改,请帮指证,Asthus,Isupposeeverythingcanbesuccessfulandeffective,andsocietywillgetpeaceandgoodness.Suchastocultivatethesoundper

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这样一来,我想一切都会变得成功和有效,比如培养健全的人格..英语句子修改,请帮指证,
As thus,I suppose everything can be successful and effective,and society will get peace and goodness .Such as to cultivate the sound personality,to ascend ability/to promote strong ability,to enhance the sense of responsibility,to strengthen the sense of national pride,to build the self-confidence ,to create a happy life ,to release of unnecessary stress,to develop various of hobbies,to improve knowledge and qualities.Until now I also think so,and there are a lot of people agree with me.
这样一来,我想一切都会变得成功和有效,比如培养健全的人格、提升更强的能力、增强责任感、加强民族自豪感、构建自信心,创造美好的生活、释放不必要的压力、开发各种各样的爱好、提高知识和素养.直到现在,我还是这么想,并且赢得很多人的赞同.

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要事先说明的是,我修改内容,一是结合您需要表达的意思,二是根据英语的习惯表达,特别是更常用的表达来进行.这样,有些地方可能没有遵循你的词汇使用习惯等,还请理解哦!
修改内容见【】.
【As thus——Thus】,I suppose everything 【can be—will become】 successful and effective,
【which is helpful for increasing peace and goodness in society】,such as to cultivate the
sound personality,to ascend ability/to promote strong ability,to enhance the sense of
responsibility,to strengthen the sense of national pride,to build the self-confidence ,
to create a happy life ,to release of unnecessary stress,to develop various of hobbies
【and】to improve knowledge and qualities.Until now I still hold on this point of view,
and there are a lot of people【agreeing with /in favor of】me.
这一篇也不错!只是,还有一些机器翻译的痕迹.
祝你开心如意!