写了一篇英语演讲稿,有很多错误,麻烦修改一下,急用Helloeveryone.,I’mgladtostandhere,andgiveyouaspeech.Wytopicis“Likeachildforever”.Wheneversomeonesay:"watchingspongebobsquarepants!"andhisfriendsoftengi

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写了一篇英语演讲稿,有很多错误,麻烦修改一下,急用
Hello everyone.,I’m glad to stand here,and give you a speech.Wy topic is “Like a child forever”.Whenever someone say:"watching spongebob squarepants!" and his friends often give him such a look the meaning is too young too naïve .However,not all cartoons are childish synonymous.It has its own unique charm,and that is to keep us innocence.When we were child,we are always full of confidence and courage,for things we wanted will do our best to fight for,when we grew up in the face of the things we like,always feel time not enough,or in difficulties,it doesn't even have the courage to try.When we were a child,we are always very pure,is happy,easy to feel satisfied,grow up,We have a lot but don't feel happy We have changed .This is not a question of age but we do not like a child,as long as we like,we can always be like a child,always passionate,always happy,always keep a smile.even if myself alone can also not afraid If you carry your childhood with you,you never become older.I hope you like a child forever

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改的还是比较多 你的有些用法太过直译化 不要靠翻译
Hello everyone.I ‘m glad to stand here and give you a speech.I want to talk about being like a child forever.Whenever someone say:"Lets watch Spongebob Squarepants!" then his friends often give him a uncomfortable look which means you are too puerile(幼稚的) and too naive .However,not all cartoons stand for childish（我觉得这样比较好）.It has its own unique charm,and that is to keep us innocence.When we were child,we were always full of confidence and courage,we always wanted to do our best to get everything attractive.However,when we grew up in the face of the things we like,we always feel time is not enough or do not believe there’s any possibility,we even don’t have the courage to try.When we were a child,we were always very pure,happy,and easy to feel satisfied.Now,we have a lot but don't feel happy anymore,It shows that we’ve changed a lot.This is not a problem of age but a problem of our different attitude ,as long as we want,we can always be like a child,always passionate,always happy,always keep a smile.,even if loneliness cannot make you feel afraid if you carry your childhood with you in your heart,you’ll never become older.I hope you are like a child forever,never give up and never feel sad.
结束语That's all.Thank you for listening.