假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。           

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear John

Yesterday I had read your post on the Internet. You want to look for a Chinese friend online who can actual help you learn the Chinese language cultures or customs.

I’m looking forward to be your friend on the Internet but I wonder whether or not you would like to accept me. If I become our friend on the Internet I’ll try my best to help you for your Chinese in my spare time. At same time I’ll introduce some cultures and custom of China to you step by step.

So if you are interesting in this please let me know your QQ number and I really hope whether we can become good friends soon.

                                                            Love

                                                            Li Hua

Answer 1

Yesterday I had read your post on the Internet. You want to look for a Chinese friend

online who can actual help you learn the Chinese language cultures or customs.

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I’m looking forward to be your friend on the Internet but I wonder whether or not you

being

would like to accept me. If I become our friend on the Internet I’ll try my best to help you for

your                                       with

your Chinese in my spare time. At ∧same time I’ll introduce some cultures and custom of

the                                   customs

China to you step by step.

So if you are interesting in this please let me know your QQ number and I really hope

interested

whether we can make good friends soon.

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