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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
    增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
    删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
    修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
    注意:
    1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
    2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
    Have you ever been to Wuzhen?It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times.Locating in Jiaxing,Zhejiang province,it has a history of about 6,000 years.Like many small towns in the southern area,which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams.Local people live in old houses,they are very friendly.During the day,you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream.The scene at night is attractively as well.There are all kinds of round and square light.Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,I will remember the water,the bridges and the houses.I love an amazing water country!
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Have you ever been to Wuzhen?It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times.
                                                                                              have
Locating in Jiaxing,Zhejiang province,it has a history of about 6,000 years.
Located
Like many small towns in the southern area,which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams.
                                                                  it                                                    over/across
Local people live in old houses,∧they are very friendly.During the day,
                                               加and
you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream.
                                              enjoy
The scene at night is attractively as well.There are all kinds of round and square light
                               attractive                                                                           lights
Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,I will remember the water,the bridges and the houses.
                                               去掉
I love an amazing water country!
         the
1.had改为have.文章介绍的是作者的经历,我已经去那里参观过很多次了,不是过去的过去.要改为现在完成时态.
2.Locating改为Located.表示坐落在某个地方,要用be located in.
3.which改为it.前面是介词like连接的介词短语,不是句子,不能用连词构成复合句,而是一个简单句.
4.through改为over或across.句意表达的是清澈的小河上有很多小桥,要用over或across,through表示从某物的中间穿过.
5.加and. 前面是一个简单句,后面也是一个简单句,要用连接and构成并列句.
6.enjoying改为enjoy.动词不定式.
7.attractively改为attractive.句在attractive作系动词的表语,要用形容词.
8.light改为lights.各种各样的灯,要用复数.
9.for去掉.句中which引导定语从句修饰前面的pictures,take pictures拍照片,不需要加介词.
10.an改为the.文章指的是乌镇这个小村,特指,要用定冠词.
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