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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Thank you for sending to me the Schedule for Summer English Courses.As for me choice,I'd prefer a six-week course for 75hours of study,these would allow me to have more time to see our beautiful country while learning English.I would like to do any traveling and try to make few new friends.Above all I can afford the tuition.
I had been learning English for 6years and I can listen,speak,read or write in English.I hope to improve my speaking English as many as possible.I want to know better about English custom.I believe I will have a wonderful time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Thank you for sending to me the Schedule for Summer English Courses.As for me choice,I'd prefer a six-week course for 75hours of study,these would allow me to have more time to see our beautiful country while learning English.I would like to do any traveling and try to make few new friends.Above all I can afford the tuition.
I had been learning English for 6years and I can listen,speak,read or write in English.I hope to improve my speaking English as many as possible.I want to know better about English custom.I believe I will have a wonderful time.
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Thank you for sending to me the Schedule for Summer English Courses.
去掉
As for me choice,I'd prefer a six-week course for 75hours of study,these would
which
allow me to have more time to see our beautiful country while learning English.
your
I would like to do any traveling and try to make∧few new friends.
some 加a
Above all I can afford the tuition.I had been learning English for 6years and I can
have
listen,speak,read or write in English.I hope to improve my speaking English as many as possible.
and spoken much
I want to know better about English custom.I believe I will have a wonderful time.
customs
1.去掉to.题干中send是及物动词,常用机构是send sb sth或send sth to sb.
2.these 改为which.题干中前后句子之间有逗号分隔,要用连词构成复合句.which引导非限制性定语从句修饰前面的整个句子内容.
3.our 改为your.逻辑指代错误,句意表达的是说话对方,我有更多的时间可以去看看你们美丽的国家.
4.any 改为some.句子是肯定形式,要用肯定结构do some traveling旅行.
5.加a.句意表达的是肯定,要用a few来表示,few表达的是否定的含义,几乎没有.
6.had 改为have.题干表示的是从过去到现在,要用现在完成时态.
7.or改为and.句意表达的是并列关系.
8.speaking 改为spoken.短语搭配,spoken English英语口语.
9.many 改为much.题干是用来修饰improve的,要用much表示程度.
10.custom改为customs.句中custom是可数名词,句意表达的是不确定的量,要用复数形式.
去掉
As for me choice,I'd prefer a six-week course for 75hours of study,these would
which
allow me to have more time to see our beautiful country while learning English.
your
I would like to do any traveling and try to make∧few new friends.
some 加a
Above all I can afford the tuition.I had been learning English for 6years and I can
have
listen,speak,read or write in English.I hope to improve my speaking English as many as possible.
and spoken much
I want to know better about English custom.I believe I will have a wonderful time.
customs
1.去掉to.题干中send是及物动词,常用机构是send sb sth或send sth to sb.
2.these 改为which.题干中前后句子之间有逗号分隔,要用连词构成复合句.which引导非限制性定语从句修饰前面的整个句子内容.
3.our 改为your.逻辑指代错误,句意表达的是说话对方,我有更多的时间可以去看看你们美丽的国家.
4.any 改为some.句子是肯定形式,要用肯定结构do some traveling旅行.
5.加a.句意表达的是肯定,要用a few来表示,few表达的是否定的含义,几乎没有.
6.had 改为have.题干表示的是从过去到现在,要用现在完成时态.
7.or改为and.句意表达的是并列关系.
8.speaking 改为spoken.短语搭配,spoken English英语口语.
9.many 改为much.题干是用来修饰improve的,要用much表示程度.
10.custom改为customs.句中custom是可数名词,句意表达的是不确定的量,要用复数形式.
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