求英语高手帮忙.纠正.MynameisLixiang,I'm23yearsold,graduatedXX（不会写这个-中国人民解放军南京陆军指挥学院）,majoringineconomicmanagement.I'mout-going,honestandhard-working.I'mgoodatplayingguitar,

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求英语高手帮忙.纠正.
My name is Li xiang, I'm 23 years old, graduated XX（不会写这个-中国人民解放军南京陆军指挥学院）,majoring in economic management. I'm out-going, honest and hard-working. I'm good at playing guitar, taking photo and singing. I was a soldier in HongKong troop for 2 years, I worked as an air attendant in Shenzhen airlines for 2 years. I like flying, So i want to be a pilot. I think my character, experience, and my ability make me qualified for this job. Thank you.

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My name is Li xiang, I'm 23 years old. I graduated from
PLA Nanjing Army Command College ,majoring, majoring in economic management. I'm out-going, honest and hard-working. I'm good at playing the guitar, taking photos and singing. I was a soldier in the HongKong troop for 2 years. I worked as an air attendant in Shenzhen airlines for 2 years. I like flying, so i want to be a pilot. I think my character, experiences, and my ability make me qualified for this job. Thank you.