我的作文第一段,请老师批改.（1）CellPhone(手机)BaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.手机已成为一种最普遍(popular)的通讯(communications)工具.2.随着科学技术（scienceandtechnology）

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我的作文第一段,请老师批改.（1） Cell Phone( 手机)
Base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 手机已成为一种最普遍(popular)的通讯(communications)工具.
2. 随着科学技术（science and technology）的发展,手机的服务功能（function）更加多样化了.
3. 手机前途光明.
Cell Phone
In morden society,the cell phone plays a more and more important roles in people's daily life.The cell phone is become one of the most popular communications tools in the world.

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Cell Phone
In morden society, the cell phone (is playing) a more and more important role in people's daily life. The cell phone has become one of the most popular communication/communicating tools in the world.
注：
1. 第一句时态从句意来看,用现在进行时最好；
2. role用单数形式,前面有a；
3. 第二句用现在完成时最佳；
4. communication是不可数名词,不能用复数形式,用communication/communicating tool都可以. 原创回答团（第159号会员）