在做关于福尔摩斯的presentation,从网上找的资料,读起来总觉得别扭,是因为比较口语化吗?求解答求挑错ShylockHolmesiscreatedbythenovelistConanDoyle'sdetective,GMhasnowbecometheworld'sbestdetectiveswere

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在做关于福尔摩斯的presentation,从网上找的资料,读起来总觉得别扭,是因为比较口语化吗?求解答求挑错
Shylock Holmes is created by the novelist Conan Doyle's detective,GM has now become the world's best detectives were synonymous!He not only cool-headed Holmes,keen observation,reasoning ability and also no one can.(In addition,he's also very clever fencing) he usually leisurely pace in Baker Street,211,the B room,Smoking Bucketawaiting commissioned by the door.But once received the case,he would immediately become a dog chasing a wolf,began locking the target and the entire incident boils,layers of filtration,until the final truth!

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Shylock Holmes is a detective figure created by the novelist Conan Doyle's, and the name has now become synonym to the world's best detectives! He is not only cool-headed and possesses keen observation, reasoning ability, but also very clever. he usually pace leisurely in the B room 211, Baker Street, smoking pipe cigar awaiting commissions by the door. But once received a case, he would immediately become a wolf chasing a dog, and began locking the target and the entire incident, until the final truth!
因为没有汉语版,我就大概把语法错误改了一下~望采纳!