给下托福作文的思路啊,要有例子啊,英文的Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Theadvertisingisthemaincauseofunhealthyeatinghabits

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给下托福作文的思路啊,要有例子啊,英文的
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits

Answer 1

Here is my recommendations of the main points of this satement.
I disagree this statement for the following three main reasons.
First of all,unheathly eating habits,like all the other habits,takes time to form,and it starts from inside,not outside.For example,getting up late,may starts from the late internet surfing last night,and occassionally it may not be noticeable,however,if you do is again and again,you have formed a bad habit of sleeping late and getting up late,it is originated from the lack of self-control and it is a problem from inside.
Secondly,advertising only offers you excuses for unhealthy eating habits.However,we all know if you are serious about the problem,you will take responsiblity rather than pointing the finger to something else and trying to find excues by blaming other things,such as advertising.
Thirdly,If you have a good eating habit,advertising may do nothing to influence it.As you have experienced the profits brought in by good eating habiits.Advertising can really fool you at all.
Hope this helps.