短文改错，该十处WhenIwasyoung.Idreamedofmanyexcitedjobs.WhenImetmybestteacher,Iwishtobeateacher,tohavefunwithsomanylovestudents.Aftergoingtoaconcert,Idreamedofbeingamusiciansomedaybringpeoplebeauti

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短文改错，该十处When I was young .I dreamed of many excited jobs . When I met my best teacher ,I wish to be a teacher ,to have fun with so many love students .After going to a concert ,I dreamed of being a musician someday bring people beautiful music .When I was watched excellent players playing so good in different games ,I really hoped I could become the cool sportsman. Everybody dream of getting a good job ,or our dreams may change from time to time as we meet different people and see different things .But one thing we should always be the same ,that is ,to work hard at school .The much knowledge we learn ,the more chances we will have in the future

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excited——exciting wish——wished love——lovely bring——bringing I was watched 中的was去掉 the cool sportsman中的the改为a